To sit quietly proclaiming no errors abound..
Floats in the space between paradise and a mountain...
Finding assurance in touching the ground...
Experience greeting with a wave of the hand
The sun's laughter heralds a new day
Such is the conversation between one and God
A private road, a sure path, and lit way
As minutes round about a new second
And detours interrupt daily routine
A parade of the mundane and adventure
Pays tribute to the serene and in between
Faith enduring the uncharted journeys
Recording discoveries from the course
Mapping the way for those who follow the song
Compelled and inspired to find the source
Trails bending with the choices declared
Views intensified by the dark and the light
A song notated upon a soul
Led by love and not by sight
Faithful soul claim this second
The eternity of paradise created for you
Putting aside all illusion of division
The song you hear is real and true
The song you hear is I and You
The song you hear is I love You.
Copyright ©2005 J. R. Hollyday
Wonderful how you can transform these everyday moments into poetic verse.
ReplyDeletejnet~is this a song? The flow is so beautiful and very comfortable reading. I love the way you express faith...'tis a beautiful work. It moved my heart. Thank you for sharing it. GB, Janellen
ReplyDeleteVery creatively written. I enjoyed the way it flowed. It was like the words were dancing on the page. I assume that I and You are You and God. Beautiful.
ReplyDeleteYou certainly are a five star artist.What a fantastic subject to write about,to incorporate the hour glass with faith, really very clevery done.It flowed very good with rhyme. Just plain easy enjoyable reading.God Bless````Pat
ReplyDeleteI love poems that have a great amount of religion in it but not to knock you over the head with it. This is that kind of poem, a message as well as a solution. This is actually a six star poem, you have excellent flow, good job and well written.
ReplyDeleteSuch a vivid and beautiful piece full of wonderful imagery. You have certainly done a fabulous job on this one and I especially love the ending "the song you hear is I love you"
ReplyDeleteHow fantastic.