Enchanted
Musing rhymes
Realizing sweet affections
Engaging soul and mind
Secrets encoded
Abstracted word painting
Bringing an enamoured poet
Unapologetic entertaining
Need this poet reveal
Confessions concealed?
Unspoken to muse
Obscuring Love's fuse?
Gentle friend, light the flame
Let me stand, enchanted, to proclaim
Unrestrained my dear muse's name
Copyright ©2005 J. R. Hollyday
I completely enjoyed this poem. Your flow is divine. I love your arangment of words. Passionate and honest I love it. ~Christine~
ReplyDeleteI like it. Not too many people write about the muse. It seems to me you have a strong relationship with yours. The poems raise the question- Who is this Emre? Very good word use and the images were pretty original. Thanks for sharing!
ReplyDeleteNice play on "muse" and "musing" at the beginning. I also like the imagery and rhythm in "abstracted word painting" and in "unapologetic entertaining."
ReplyDeleteI truly enjoyed this poem. It flowed with such ease for me, the reader. You are talented indeed. I enjoy your rhyming ability and meter.
ReplyDeleteWell done,
Viv
I have a muse too!!! My muse is called Miriam. It's a really great idea to dedicate your work to your abstract source of inspiration. It's a well written poem, a little complicated when it comes to vocabulary, but good! Congratulations, Emre! :))
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